Mr. Clement: Just to clarify, Justice Sotomayor, I'm not
suggesting that the Federal Government has any special
authority to recognize traditional
marriage. So if -- the assumption is that nobody
can do it. If the States can't do it either, then the Federal Government can't do it. So the Federal Government –“
MS. KAPLAN: To flip the language of the House Report, Mr. Chief Justice, I think it comes from a moral understanding today that gay people are no
different, and that gay married couples' relationships are not significantly different from the relationships of straight married people. I don't think -
CHIEF JUSTICE ROBERTS: I understand that…”
MS. KAPLAN: To flip the language of the House Report, Mr. Chief Justice, I think it comes from a moral understanding today that gay people are no
different, and that gay married couples' relationships are not significantly different from the relationships of straight married people. I don't think -
CHIEF JUSTICE ROBERTS: I understand that…”
Standing up before the Supreme Court to argue a
controversial issue like same sex marriage could be daunting to any average
man. It takes courage for Mr.
Clement to make a case against the chief justice, and eight associate justices
of the United States. However, Mr.
Clement hangs in there, while being interrupted by the chief justice. Although Mr. Clement is particularly
polite, his tone does not affect his negative treatment from the opposition and
the Supreme Court.
In this short excerpt, Clement’s claim is that the Federal
Government does not have the authority to define traditional marriage if the
states don’t have the authority either.
It is hard to determine his tone in his words, but it seems that his
tone is calm and polite. In his
situation, it is crucial to be polite while in the company of the Supreme
Court. This is a useful tool in
appealing to the audience. Not
only is his audience the Supreme Court members, but he is also speaking to the court
viewers, and all the people that are watching the broadcast of the case. Furthermore, since this issue is so
relevant in contemporary politics, this particular Supreme Court will have a
significant audience. Since the
issue of same sex marriage is so controversial, Clement must maintain a neutral
tone, or else he will face the consequences of angry petitioners.
While Clement is making his point, Ms. Kaplan abruptly
interrupts him. This behavior is
demeaning towards Clement, perhaps undeserved. However, Ms. Kaplan interprets Clements claim, offering her
explanation. She brings in “moral
understanding” to the equation.
With this, Kaplan is using pathos to appeal to the audience. Her claim is that gay married couples
are no different than straight married couples. Before she could
finish her sentence and offer evidence to back up her statement, Chief Justice
Roberts interrupted her. This is
an example of how they received impolite treatment from the Supreme Court,
regardless of their manners.
The use of diction also plays an important role in the
effective language used by Clement and Kaplan. For example, the use of the word “special” referring to the
government authority makes the audience realize the unequal powers that the
government has. The use of “traditional”
in context is a useful word to make marriage seem like a regular aspect of our
culture, and that all people should be able to have the same right to
tradition. Kaplan’s use of “moral
understanding” is a powerful form of diction as well. Every person wants to be ethical and proper, so the use of
this word makes the audience want to accomplish “moral understanding.”
Reading the dialect of the Supreme Court cases are filled
with rhetorical devices and appeals, and for a good reason. They intend to use their language effectively,
with the goal of convincing and persuading the audience. Tools like diction and tone are useful
in shaping your argument in a way that can directly make the audience feel your
words. It’s impressive to me that
these professionals are able to use language in such an effective way.
Reuben, each of your individual analyses is sound; however, what you're missing is a clear, specific, arguable thesis statement to bind this argument together. Stick that thesis near the beginning; then, your individual discussions of tone and diction can all be working towards supporting it.
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